New Location list

Alley-way just outside the graveyard:

This alleyway is ideal for our setting because it is a dark location which is isolated.

Location 1 (Graveyard/street): Used to show the main running away (where the flashbacks happen)

Location 2 (Work place): Where the fight happens between the couple

Time period- 21st century, modern, set in Britain (due to british accents)

Filming and Editing

Filming:This included making several different versions of each clip and picking the best one. We used a tripod to get a steady camera for the first scene, and a shaky hand for the second.

Editing involved: -

• making 'cuts'
• adding transitions
• adding sounds/music
• creating 'slow' motion
• adding in credits and titles
• turning scenes into black and white

Storyboard

Present day: Before the flashback

Shot 1: Footsteps walking (can be heard as well) Time frame: 5 secondsTransition: Pan up to rest of the body

Shot 2: Long-shot of the character walking slowlyTime frame: 2 secondsTransiton: Continuous shot

Shot 3: Extreme long-shot of the character walking away from camera. He slows down, and starts to run (because he is upset). Time frame: 4 secondsTransition: Continous shot

Shot 4: Character runs out of sight from the camera. Time frame: 2 secondsTransition: Cut to flashback

Past:The flashback

Shot 5: The camera pans around the room which will have photographs of the 'happy' couple
Time period: 5-7 seconds
Transition: Pans around the room to the argument taking place

Shot 6: The camera pans around to the man busy at work and beginning to get angry at the wife visiting him there to bring his lunch
Time period: 2 secondsTransition: Continuous pan

Shot 7: Character stands up
Time period: 2 seconds
Transition: Continuous pan




Shot 8: Dialouge between characters
Time period: 4 seconds

Transition: Continuous shot

Shot 9: Husband slaps the wife
Time period: 1 second
Transition: Continuous shot

Shot 10: Character reacts to slap
Time period: 1 secondTransition: Cuts sharply as it goes back to present

Present: After the flashback

Shot 11: Character crouching down on the floor
Time frame: 3 secondsTransition: Zooms into his face





Shot 12: Over-the-shoulder shot of character looking at photograph of wife.
Time period: 3 seconds
Transition: Cut

Shot 13: Front shot of the character looking at the photograph
Time frame: 3 seconds
Transition: Cut

Shot 14: Character looking at photograph with another mysterious character looking over his shoulder
Time frame: 4 seconds
Transition: Cut

Feedback for our film

During a lesson where we went through the evaluation process. We watched our unfinished film as an example and the rest of our class had to comment on what was good about it and what could be improved.





Positive feedback

• flash back effect, shakiness


• the music built up tension gradually


• black and white worked within the flashback


• contrast scenes

Negative feedback

• music too happy in places


• dialogue too scripted


• transition between the end of the flashback and next scene too sharp