Feedback for our film

During a lesson where we went through the evaluation process. We watched our unfinished film as an example and the rest of our class had to comment on what was good about it and what could be improved.





Positive feedback

• flash back effect, shakiness


• the music built up tension gradually


• black and white worked within the flashback


• contrast scenes

Negative feedback

• music too happy in places


• dialogue too scripted


• transition between the end of the flashback and next scene too sharp